| Reviews for the rules of not believing in love |
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trying 2/18/08 . chapter 33I absolutely love this. :) The style it's written in hooked me in instantly. |
shy green rock 1/7/08 . chapter 33It's written in a different style, which well is cool. I mean the chapters were short but sweet,down to the point ya know. |
heartfeltlove 1/5/08 . chapter 2She broke rule number one... This seems intresting! |
Error-in G 12/24/07 . chapter 19"made me come back: to reality, at the very least." "made me come back to reality, at the very least." or "come back... to reality" |
Error-in G 12/24/07 . chapter 17"Now don’t get the wrong impression: I love my mom." should be "Now don’t get the wrong impression; I love my mom." |
Error-in G 12/24/07 . chapter 13"You stood up, then sitting down right next to me, stretching your legs out." That doesn't work... "sat down" or "and stretching" would, though.. Still like it, but a moderate amount of typos, so you just wanna watch that. |
Error-in G 12/24/07 . chapter 3Couple spelling errors, here. Otherwise, this is really neat. I love how you're doing it. [ |
Error-in G 12/24/07 . chapter 1No clue where this is going, but I love what you've come up with in this chapter. |
SaraBeara 11/12/07 . chapter 33 i really love how this is written. almost like a poem of sorts. awesome story! :] |
darkangel402 11/9/07 . chapter 31I really really like it! I hope you update soon! Even though the chapters are really short, they're really interesting and actually make the reader understand what is going on...yeah... :) Can't wait to read what happens next! |
HeavenHelpMe05 11/8/07 . chapter 31 it's really good. like ur really there. |
Avery-102 11/8/07 . chapter 31INSTANT LOVE IN A soon. It's so cute. -Avery |
it's not your fault 11/4/07 . chapter 12i really really really like this. keep writing, and keep updating. |