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sticks stones and TECHNO
2008-02-18
ch 33,
abuseI absolutely love this. :)
The style it's written in hooked me in instantly.
shy green rock
2008-01-07
ch 33,
abuseIt's written in a different style, which well is cool. I mean the chapters were short but sweet,down to the point ya know.
heartfeltlove
2008-01-05
ch 2,
abuseShe broke rule number one...

This seems intresting!
entirely anonymous
2007-12-24
ch 19,
abuse"made me come back: to reality, at the very least."

"made me come back to reality, at the very least."

or

"come back... to reality"
entirely anonymous
2007-12-24
ch 17,
abuse"Now don’t get the wrong impression: I love my mom."
should be
"Now don’t get the wrong impression; I love my mom."
entirely anonymous
2007-12-24
ch 13,
abuse"You stood up, then sitting down right next to me, stretching your legs out."
That doesn't work... "sat down" or "and stretching" would, though..
Still like it, but a moderate amount of typos, so you just wanna watch that.
entirely anonymous
2007-12-24
ch 3,
abuseCouple spelling errors, here. Otherwise, this is really neat. I love how you're doing it. [=
entirely anonymous
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abuseNo clue where this is going, but I love what you've come up with in this chapter.
SaraBeara
2007-11-12
ch 33, anon.
abusei really love how this is written. almost like a poem of sorts. awesome story!
:]
darkangel402
2007-11-09
ch 31,
abuseI really really like it!!
I hope you update soon!!
Even though the chapters are really short, they're really interesting and actually make the reader understand what is going on...yeah... :)
Can't wait to read what happens next!!
HeavenHelpMe05
2007-11-08
ch 31, anon.
abuseit's really good. like ur really there.
Avery-102
2007-11-08
ch 31,
abuseINSTANT LOVE IN A STORY.Update soon. It's so cute.

-Avery
it's not your fault
2007-11-04
ch 12,
abusei really really really like this. keep writing, and keep updating.
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