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| felicia13 2007-11-27 ch 1,  | abuseI really like how the title clarifies the whole thing. It's really a nice touch that many authors lack... titles taken directly from the poem feel too much like cheating for my tastes. As for the poem itself, I like the first two lines and that you used to word "mendacious." Your vocabulary is refreshing, if sometimes strenuous for my own boundaries... Felicia. |