I liked it.

It’s a good story. Just a few things, here.
It’s to know
Before the words ending with ing in past tense you need a was preceeding it as the ing makes it a future or present tense

It's very well written. ^^ I like the content of the story and I hope to see it continue. The characters are very colorful, the poker game reminds me of Allan Walker from D. Gray-Man, but that's another story. And I like the history as well, can't wait for me.

Just one little thing I picked up with my nit-picky grammar ways...

"I new Theresa"

It's in your first chapter and I think you meant knew. But it was small, superior grammar as usual.

Hehe! I like it. It's awesome! I've never read Westerns before but this is an awesome read! Update soon :D


-MD

oh, nice. You've kept the mood well from the last chapter, and i do like your character development :) The backstory was fab, helped to bring both of them out very well.

Nice! I like it. It flowed very well, I thought, with just the right amount of Kid's character showing through in the first person. It's been a while since you posted it but I'll bookmark it anyway; I hope you write more. =)

I like it. Intrigueing story, makes you want to know more about Theresa's past and her association with the High Roller. The prose is efficient and good, not too artsy-fartsy with clichéd discriptions, but gives room to your imagination.

Great work. I like your historical stuff (because I'm a history student myself), keep it up.

oh, nice. You capture such a beautiful atmosphere in this, I can picture it so well in my head. I don't often read westerns, but I did enjoy this.

Ending is a little...odd. (slightly confusing, although I am very tired so maybe thats it). Is this going to be continued?

Love the characters too. Great job =D

Hm...
Very, very interesting!

You've got me hooked, that's for sure. ;)

This story's really good! The characters are great-and I like the humour in it. Good job :)

I love it! Very good. Write more sooN!