 Noxcilla 2007-11-16 . chapter 1So I thought I'd taste a little something of your work, and here's what I've decided-you're a fantastic writer! As I was reading this, I was becoming annoyed and disgusted with the subject matter (I loathe any form of cheating, on any level. I've been told I'm too harsh on the subject). But I couldn't help but love the story, because there's something about the writing that reaches pure and true communication. Every second makes the reader feel like they know on all levels what is going on. I guess I could just say the writing is mature, and leave it at that, because I'm having trouble explaining what it is about your work that... works, lol.
I was completely happy about the ending, as you might guess. Way to show character growth.
Loved 'cuddle puddle'. I'll have to beat myself away from the phrase with a club.
Will be reading the rest of your stuff as I get to it, and hope I'll be able to give you something more usefull than gushing praise. |