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| devil-Chrno55 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI like this story.the descriptions were really good and YAY!! Everyone had a happy ending! |
| Mayleena 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseinteresting...good descriptions...great write! |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseNice work. I liked the ending sentence with the pause before she admitted she was even happy. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~ |