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PurpleSnowflake
2008-08-13
ch 7,
abusei swear to god
i think i know you
im not kidding
or maybe i just know someone exactly exactly like you.
fortuna scriptor
2008-06-29
ch 3,
abusei want to say iapperciate tyour sttory
well written extremely realistic because of ur natural conflict with ur self vry enjoyable keep writing i'll subscribe!
Ice That
2008-06-26
ch 7,
abuseIf only guys had more balls to girls who supposely don't care what others think.
Jack Argyle
2008-04-22
ch 6,
abuseHey, I'm back from that place where my university is inconveniently located, which has given me some time off. Let's have a look at this then.

Ha, you chapters are short but full of ideas, like Danny DeVito. From Narnia to Liam Neeson to this chapter full of somewhat hypocritical self-introspection.

'I’m just full of paradoxes aren’t I?'

It's funny. I laughed. I use to be scared of Emos, but thanks to your story I just laugh at them now. Sometimes. They're complex creatures.

Alright, I'm off.
ServalSpotz
2008-03-05
ch 6,
abuseYeah, sometimes it seems like my friends are my friends only because I'm weirder than they are. I don't think I'd want to be friends with me. I'd probably think I was too annoying and talkative and weird.
Please update soon.
Bye.
surrealphobia
2008-02-23
ch 2,
abuseOh goddess...

This is amazing, insightful and hilarious, I do hope this gets published. Honestly, if it did the world would be thrown into chaos and pulled back out. In a good way. I think I'm trying to say, good write.

Surreal
Psycho Shocker
2008-02-12
ch 6,
abuseSTOP! Collaborate and Listen!
RRDT's back with my brand new invention!
No I'm not going Vanilla Ice on you, I just felt the need to do that. Any-who, on to the story.
STOP! I can see where you are coming from, but you're just insulting yourself. Could you please say something nice about yourself? I am sure you are the most beautiful thing on this planet, and you are just hiding it. Show your inner beauty! Let yourself be heard!
Rio RRDT!~
The Candlelight Hour
2008-02-12
ch 6,
abuseyeah, ur right, we can't be friends anymore. XD I just kidding.

I lah pah.

Okay, now, I've explained this before... ANOREXIA IS NOT A PHYSICAL DISEASE, dumdum! Anorexia is a MENTAL DISEASE, in which a LOW SELF-ESTEEM level is manifested in a food obssession- meaning, you don't WANT to eat, because you neurotically think you are too fat, and exercise CONSTANTLY in fear of BECOMING FAT. And do NOT argue with me on this one, I looked it up, and will major in psycology one day. YES, you DO have a freakishly low BMI, but that's different, that's a physical condition, NOT a mental one.

Besides, you only don't eat cuz I always steal ur fries. :)

I
Jack Argyle
2008-01-20
ch 5,
abuseHm, this is a hard thing to review. It's rather interesting seeing the history of a person on FP; makes you remember that they are real people, not just some computerised name wih a dictionary.
And Narnia sucked. The best part of that was Blitzkrieg at the beginning. The overly religious undertones just turned me off the rest of the movie.
And Liam Neeson has been Oskar Schindler, Qui-Gon Jin, Ra's Al Ghul and Godfrey of Ibelin so if he wants to be a CG lion as well then I say let him. No one argues with Schindler.
Can't say I analysed the character's outfits in LOTR though; I was too busy anticipating the next battle. Helm's Deep just kicks the shit out of Minas Tirith. I think that's how you spell it. Probably not.
Okay, enough of my movie thoughts. Great work.
Jack Argyle
2008-01-20
ch 2,
abuse"I think emo, but I don’t dress emo. It makes me sad. I wish I did. That would be totally awesome."

Humor and angst are an odd combination but you managed to have them co-existing with relative ease. Bravo for that.

I must admit, I'm rather close-minded and judgemental when it comes to Emos (probably because the seven or so I know are horrible, horrible people) but here's hoping that this little biography of yours will open my eyes and allow me to get some meaning out of Panic! At The Disco songs.
The Candlelight Hour
2007-11-30
ch 4,
abuseare you effing kidding me? why don't you TELL me any of these things. like, i have to read in some random story you write "oh... yeah i coulda been a countess." WTF ZMO? is all this stuff, like, true? WTF

not to say that I don't like it, which I do. but... jeeze! teel a girl somethin' why doncha!

GOO

- (Do I really need to sign a name? I mean seriously, it's not that hard to figure our who I am. Though... I COULDA been friends with a countess. then I'D owe FER 50- now 43!- $$... hm, interesting concept... but I digress. BOOT.)
Ramenluver
2007-11-22
ch 4,
abuseYou're house sounded beautiful! The trees sounded lovely...:}

Sorry I didn't review back in so long.

Little busy. Little lazy. Little both.

Little upheaval of my own character. But in a good way.:)

-Ramen
Ramenluver
2007-11-22
ch 3,
abuseHaha, wow. Really like your sense of humor. And I totally agree. I like it when people are independent and aren't so coddled. It makes them spoiled and helpless if it's used in excess.

And I thought you were a dude. Not meaning any offense. You just write like one. Don't know how to describe it. But regardless of that, still like yo style. I kinda needed this today. Someone who says they aren't in agreement with the usual, spoiled population.
Thanks.

-Ramen
RoseLife
2007-11-18
ch 4,
abuseAwsome work! XD
and i get how you feel
i have been moved around the world so much
and been to many different homes and schools.
im ok with it, but it kinda sucks when i hear my friends complaining how they have moved maybe once or twice (and only from another city or state-not even major), and how they are 'so depressed' and 'miss thier friends-want to go back' and blah blah blah. and im just like, get over it, you dont even know how it feels to have moved over the globe!
haha but i think its just the way i was brought up, because currently, its been 3 years that i have lasted where i am, and thats the most that i have stayed in one school. And i know i should be happy, you know.. that im not moving again, but i have the feeling i WANT to move, i WANT a new envrionment.
haha i think i've gone insane, who WANTS to, in thier right mind, leave their friends/family and go somewhere completely new?
lol anyways! soz for making it so long! XD
i loved how you write, keep it up!! :P
~Rose~
love is contagious
2007-11-12
ch 3,
abuseThis is... how to describe it... clever. I like it. :-)
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