|Reviews for the secrets of his hands|
| creepy kiss on tuesday 11/8/07 . chapter 1
metaphor? he is gulity of doing something bad that only you seem to care about or know about? hm thats what i got out of it. lol or maybe its just a kid with really dirty hands. anyway, i liked it
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 11/6/07 . chapter 1
I think that the "problem" with thisd piece is that I really don't know who you are talking about, so I can not make a connection or even visualize this man or why no one notices his hands. I find it intriging though, but I must say I don't like it at all because it seems unfinished, or unstarted. Just something... But you do have very nice descriptions and imagery for some things.