hmm...it was interesting.
you switched tenses a few times, but it was definitely interesting. I love morbid things, and the imagery is clear, but...slightly lacking. I felt like I wasn't getting the whole picture, which I'm sure was intentional. I liked the voice of the narrator. I'm not sure if you'd even designed it to have a certain voice, but it definitely had one. A very...serious, deep voice. Straight forward and slightly scary. If I'd actually heard it, i'm sure it would have sent shivers down my spine.
Once again, however, you definitely know how to write the excepts. The small, one shot stories that aren't really oneshots or stories, merely...scenes. The types of things that inspire most people to write an entire story, and you say, "nah...too much work. I'd rather just be able to inspire by one scene, rather then one story or novel." And you do a great job. Well done, again!