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Ice and Snow 2008-12-09 . chapter 3
it's been more than a year =O. I'm really interested in what comes after next...!! x]
RansomRansomRansom 2008-10-18 . chapter 1
I totally love the story so far. It seems tragic and sad though :(

nontheless, I still like it!
heartslol 2008-06-20 . chapter 4
awesome story. love what you did to eros and psyche. now just outta curiosity will there be more of this? if so when?
Ice and Snow 2008-05-26 . chapter 4
it's been half a year xD continue soon!
SpaceCadet87 2007-11-19 . chapter 4
I love this myth.

But if I may add some constructive criticism, your writing is very distant. Like when you describe the room, it is very "this is this" and "that is that". I don't want to know there is a shag carpet, I wanted to feel it. The really nitty gritty stuff. I'm not suggesting this for everything though, because it might go on forever, but everyonce in a while, it adds character, gives them feeling. Do you know what I mean?

But so far, so good.
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