Reviews for Bless My Ear Canals

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blackbubbleblue 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abusethat was cute but i think it is beter as is short and sweet.
PhotographanAngel 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseGreat job! I loved it =] Have you considered adding on to this? Because I realy think you should! But, really. I enjoyed it. Good job =]
Katie Saychiadu 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseGrannyP - PLEASE write more!! That was well written, intriguing and I want more :) Good job! I'll be reading more of your stories as I have time!!
SecretsUntold 2008-01-30 ch 1,	abuseloved it.
DarkJustice007 2008-01-23 ch 1,	abuseThis is a sweet story. I usually dont go for these kinds of stories but I really liked this one. Good work. P.S. I'm new to FictionPress and if it doesn't trouble you could you read one of my stories? Thanks.
Tetelestai 2008-01-10 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this! The first thing that attracted me to this story was the title. "Bless My Ear Canals" hahha, nice. =) This was well developed for a oneshot, and I loved the part where the girl put her lips on Cody's cup, exactly where his lips had been. That was cute. =) One thing though, I thought Cody was kind of laying the compliments a little too thick by the end of the story. But the girl's responses to him were nice and level headed. I also didn't catch any spelling/grammar mistakes, which is a big plus. Good job!
Authoress-Boleyn 2007-12-16 ch 1,	abuseIt's wonderful.
Mosaic Stains 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abuseI honestly hate those times in class when the professors say, "Switch papers with someone". I find it so annoying. I'm not worried but if I had of wanted someone else to read my stuff, then I would have said so. Oh, well... it's one of the things you have to suck up when you start college or university. Anyways, about the short, I can see it as a longer story, but for now the short is pretty nice. The compliments were starting to get annoying and unrealistic, but I like her comment to it, which brought it full swing back to realistic. I also thought the way you described how they came to kiss, was really cute. So overall, I give you two-thumbs up for cuteness. ~M.S.
Silveralsa 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abuseI could definitely the portray of the half torn - half I don't care. Very well written :)
Sobriquets 2007-11-27 ch 1,	abuseI liked your one-shot. It was sweet in a nice way, and not overly fluffy. And I also like how the story was realistic in the way your main character had problems and wasn't a baby girl. I'm not saying she was really messed up either though, I'm just saying it was nice to read a story that wasn't so over the moon as other stories I've read (and written). I'd also have to say the story ends on just the right note. Good Luck! (with future writing of course ^.^) -Katie
A Perfect Sonnet 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abuseExcellent one-shot! My favorite thing, besides the title (which is effing brilliant), is how you didn't wrap up every detail of what would happen. We don't know what happens with Devon or Cody or if she lives happily ever after with either of them. We don't know if things work out with her and Cody even for the short-term or any of that whatnot. I like when a one-shot leaves me curious about the characters instead of knowing everything. I also love that they don't profess their undying love for each other. I know that seems kind of random, since it obviously wouldn't make sense here, but that doesn't stop an infinite number of others from doing it. People seem to think that if it's a romance then they must profess their love or die. Or die professing their love. Anyways, thank you for that. Also, I really like that your main character is cheating on her boyfriend. Not that I'm pro-cheating, but it's nice to see a leading lady with flaws who makes questionable and imperfect decisions. It's refreshing and makes me feel better about FP. This was really good. Thank you for existing.
M.F. Hawthorne 2007-11-19 ch 1,	abusethis is a very nice one shot. I like how you ended it. Short and sweet. What she wanted. Nice job! : )
Let Them Eat Cake 2007-11-19 ch 1,	abuseYAY! A piano! Sorry, I have an OBSESSION with pianos! ^^ Anyways, I don't like the idea of cheating, but you pull this off really well! I really enjoyed this! There were one or two things that I would have worded differently, but I can't remember what they were so they were pretty minor things! That was really awesome (PS - I like the title! Heeheehee!) Great job! Kay (Let Them Eat Cake)
Sleeping Chaos 2007-11-10 ch 1,	abuseHey ! I had to find some time to read your one-shot, and I'm so glad I did. It's cute and so well written as always. I almost wish it wasn't a one-shot, but it works great this way. Great work as usual! You gotta keep writing 'cause you're so great at it! And I promise I will read and review Secret Memories as soon as I can. Saphira.
Hearts To Rome 2007-11-07 ch 1,	abusegod damn girl. you rave about my stories; and then i take one look at yours flies away in the wind GOD nice one shot. very cute. ;)

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