Funny. Very graphic. The dialogue painted a picutre worth 956 words.
jimbo the jammy jam jam of red 2007-11-10 . chapter 1
Cute, though I hafta admit, I did laugh at the f-thing. (Feeling guilty)...
Purple Uranium 2007-11-04 . chapter 1
[“You wound me.”
“I know.”
“I bet you liked it.”
“Ugh.”
“Groan of pleasure?”]
** CLASSIC, man. I loved this entire dialogue thing. And then how he wrestled the date out of her in the end? That was even better. Don't stop doing what you're doing. I love it.
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