wow, this one's sad too. But this one is diffantly creepier, but for some reason I like it. Nice work!

I like it. "Hauningtly beautiful" my dear. Haha. I love that...Anyways, I would add it to my fav. stories but I have to empty it out because it says I am over the limit...Oops. Anyways, the only criticsm that I have for this is the way that you say "blood is my graphite". Sometimes there is three lines between it, one time there was four, etc. I mean, don't get me wrong, it still sounds great, but I think it kind of disrupts the flow. But I still love it. Although it is creepy. ; )

Great poem. I'm trying to write a poem with the line blood stained walls, but I can't write like you can.. It's doesn't flow. :P

I'm getting there, but it won't have the depth this one has.

Please continue writing. :)

Wow, that's creepy. But very good. You should make a story out of it.