love this. it's been a while since you wrote this, but i think it's one of your best.

you shouldn't be sick of writing this. its really good.

this is simply amazing, y r u sick of writing it!?!?!
so i pretty much luv that line 'he doesn't really think of her. except when he does'
...hm...i'm trying to think of criticism...the only part that i was lyk wat?! at was: 'the skirt barely reaches her wrist' i was lyk how does that work and then figured it out
this whole thing flows really well that was the only part that broke it up for me so yea...
much luv
sarahh

Aww, that's so sweet :)

I've fallen deeply in love with your writing. You're an amazing writer, talented beyond belief. This piece held so much emotion, even being so short.

*adds to favorite author list/favorite story list*

k.X