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| Shene Tipa 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abusethat was very good! i like that the poor little mouse had courage the whole time, but didn't know what it was. it is like the cowardly lion! very good! |
| Azure35 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseWell done well done. Though it is short and foreshadowing is quite evident, It was a a nice short read. It was written pretty well there was some change of voice in the begging but you seemed to get more into it as you went along. I did enjoy reading and look forward to reading more of your work. |