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Dylan Marie 2008-01-04 ch 32,	abuseYAY! I love happy endings! You scared me so bad with that bloody dream and when the doctor came out after the surgery, but I'm glad it all ended up good in the end!
lizabeth mercado 2007-12-15 ch 32, anon.	abusea beautiful story...keep up the good work...when is your next story?...i'll be waiting... god bless you...
vio923 2007-12-14 ch 32,	abuseNice ending! What I think that you should do is to write an EPILOGUE for this -- a few years out when they are older.
Val Skauf 2007-12-14 ch 32,	abusereally good! ill be sure to check out your other stories!
Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-12-13 ch 32,	abuseAww, your sad? So sorry!! IT IS THE END THANK YOU SO SO MUCH FOR STICKING THROUGH THE STORY AND GIVING US REGULAR UPDATES YOU ARE PROABLY THE MOST CONSISTANT WRITER HERE! AHH, IT'S SO HARD TO THINK THAT IT'S ALL OVER! SORRY, ALL CAPS. I HAVE TO SAY THAT YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB ON THIS, AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THE EDITED VERSION (PLEASE MAKE IT A DIFFERENT STORY FROM THIS ONE, NOT JUST REPLACING ALL THE CHAPTERS OR SOMETHING BECAUSE OTHERWISE I CAN'T REVIEW) AHH! YOU DID SUCH A WONDERFUL JOB! CONGRATS AND I AM VERY PROUD TO SAY THAT I WAS A CONSTANT REVIEWER! YAY!! -Evil Angel of DOOM
FireFallon 2007-12-13 ch 32,	abuseI'm not going to lie...I was secretly hoping that when she fainted that they'd run tests on her find out she was pregnant and they'd be together like a happy little family but no, you just had to end it like that and then have the gall to not write an epilogue?? How dare you. ;) But seriously I love this story and am sad to see it end...I want to see this extra chapter even if you don't one-shot it GIVES A VERY BIG GRIN AND HOLDS UP A HUGE 'HINT' SIGN
Inkhearts and Inkstains 2007-12-13 ch 32,	abuseI;m so happy he wasn't dead, the last chapter scared me. It's a great ending and it fits the story and rounds it up well.
Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-12-09 ch 31,	abuseWhy, hello! I have to say, your updates always blow me away. Do you have work now, because november's over and such. Okay, I wasn't thinking that you had to make any scenes to... R or anything, I was just thinking that you could have them do more then walk in the room. Of course, I love your story and such, so I can't complain. Rawr, sorry, my brain is mush right now.
vio923 2007-12-08 ch 31,	abuseI'm being optimistic. Jamie fell to the floor from relief -- everything will be OK -- right?
FireFallon 2007-12-08 ch 31,	abuseI am going to kill you...
Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-12-06 ch 30,	abuseOkay, I get what your saying about maybe cutting it out, but it (in my opinion) could have had potential for an entire chapter!! Nothing too graphic of course (keeping it PG for the little kiddies ;D) But I don't see why you wouldn't want to have them sleeping together at some point in the story, you can also do a lot with it in future chapters. As always, love the story! I'm very proud to say that I have been with you from chapter one, and give my constant reviews! YIPPIE FOR CHAPTER 30!! Now, I have all of my homework to do (you lucky ducky, your off!) And hey, what's up with the Doom? It's DOOM XDXDXD mwahahaha...
Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-12-04 ch 29,	abuseHAHA!! Wow, you totally skipped anything that may be deemed slightly innapropriate. XD Oh, my grandma and my aunt did nano too. It was kinda funny, we were always asking her if she got that days words or not (they both did a number of words a day) And, YESH! W00T! I Loved this chappie!! Though you totally skipped over anything that the little kiddies may not be able to handle (that's in the words of a friend of mine)
vio923 2007-12-03 ch 29,	abuseJames is very romantic. That was a wonderful date. How long is story supposed to be? Will we read about his tranplant, etc...? They are great together -- hope things work out for them.
SuperCUTEJensen 2007-12-03 ch 29,	abusebeautiful chapter.. cant wait to see what hapepns next...
FireFallon 2007-12-03 ch 29,	abuseWe can be writing buddies next year! :) I loved this chapter and I knew they were going to have sex, I just knew it, but you better not pull a Sarah Dresden and have him die and her wind up pregnant or I might just kill you...insert menacing music and stare here I like this chapter a whole lot, can't wait for your next update! I agree with you guys like that aren't all that common, too bad, I want one :( ;)

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