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PhantomDaisuke 2009-10-20 . chapter 5
i love this story XD ahaha but looks like u hvent made an update to it for a while. oh please make the next chapter i cant wait to see what happens between the two XD. and hopefully sum action happens between them like bubbles ahaha XD. keep up good work :3
Istappen 2009-10-16 . chapter 5
Are you going to continue this story?? Pretty please update! :)
Dreaming Maya 2009-09-24 . chapter 5
THIS STORY IS GREAT!! It's so funny, I love Zen. But not enough to not want to take his job as Ethan's soulmate. Won't Ethan be assulted by females trying to claw his eyes out or something after watching a certain youtube video? Hah, poor guy. Can't wait for the next chapter.
JerryOnigiri 2009-06-16 . chapter 5
Please continue this story, I really like it.
Masquerade of Misanthropy 2009-06-01 . chapter 2
Aw...poor Ethan. I can't even imagine being around someone who talks as much as Zen does, especially since he's so used to being alone. There is some truly excellent characterization going on here, nice job!
Masquerade of Misanthropy 2009-06-01 . chapter 1
Oh my. That was too funny, I was cracking up the entire way through. This first chapter kind of reminds me of Dr. Seuss's Green Eggs and Ham, but in a good way, I promise! Loving the character contrast too :D
ElliotSavesTheDay 2009-05-01 . chapter 5
I'm not sure how I got to chapter five. I'm not sure how Ethan got to chapter five. I thought Zen was cute for the first five minute . . . until he actually started talking a lot. I found nothing about him endearing. Nothing. I wanted so badly for Ethan to slap him as hard as physically possible. Furthermore, there is /nothing/ cute about weeboos. And Zen was a weeboo. The one time I did like him when he was upset. That was the only time I liked his character.
SineMetu 2009-04-05 . chapter 5
You are a genious. I was laughing the whole time reading this. Pssh screw Ethan. Zen, you can live with me. XD Pleasee update. ^_^
XxShadowDancerxX 2009-04-01 . chapter 5
MWAHAHAHAHAHA! He is weakening Zen!! Go get him!! XD So cute!!
XxShadowDancerxX 2009-04-01 . chapter 3
E! >w< I love your work!! This is amazing!! I love Zen!! ^^ -glomps him-
ValuedOpinion 2009-02-06 . chapter 5
Hey. I find this story extremely amusing. :P I know it's been a LONG time since you've updated this one, but I was wondering if there is any way that you'd continue writing it...?? I'd really like to read more :D
fairies and snapple 2009-01-19 . chapter 5
This is, like, so funny. Zen's ramblings and Ethan's oblivious...ness. And all. Is that a word? Well, either way. I love Youtube, I want my personal life to be the biggest thing on Youtube. Only, you know, not. This is great, please please update soon.
PretzelSalt 2008-10-05 . chapter 3
Haha...I actually know Holly Black, so it's really weird whenever I hear people saying that they've read her books...

I love this story! Reminds me a little bit of Coincidencs by tipping ivy, but I like this one just as much!
Katsumi-kun 2008-10-01 . chapter 5
aw that is really sweet and cute in a sort of ** off way. Jeeze he must have ADHD xD. I like the story and I wonder if that *drama* will come up again
Jusmine 2008-09-27 . chapter 5
OMG! The bit on the bus was hilarious!! And I love Zen's little rants. You mentioned in an A/N that we're supposed to skip over them or whatever, but I read them all. :D Mainly because it's the closest I've ever come to inspecting my own brain from an outward point of view. lol. :D

And, of course, those brilliant, brilliant little lines you put in throughout the story are...Brilliant! Like this one:

"Zen gave me a look that suggested that I’d just admitted to being an alien from outer space seeking to rape every gerbil on Earth." I laughed SO hard...I'm really getting some strange looks from my family right now. lol. :D

When is Ethan just going to admit that he's falling in love?! Argh! Please, please, please, please, please, (etc., etc., etc., etc.) update this soon!
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