Reviews for Crushed By Inertia

felicia13
2007-11-27
ch 1,

abuseHow very depressing. It's weird how short this looks. Usually, you bulk these joria up with longer words and it fills out better, but... I sort of like this condensed version. It's simple and conveys meaning well.

The way you describe feeling something out of the corner of your eye... breathtaking. Hooray for mixing sensory perception!

Felicia.

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