wow, i really dig a lot of your ideas, they're refreshing. It's hard to find people who can write darker poetry without it being trite or empty. i really liked the part at the end, the most important lessons... I'm big on collaboration and would like to do some stuff with you if you'd be interested. Check some of my stuff out and feel free to send me an email or leave some reviews if you'd like to do some writing together. also, if you know some sites like this one that have some more sophisticated writing (seems like every other poem is called slit my wrists by gothangelx on here) i'd like to get signed up at some other places too.
Thanks in advance