hi I'm sonicmilahedgie and me and my best friend eliza read ur story, hope just now and we think its an AWESOME story! we beg YOU!plz write a sequel u r an awesome writer we love to read MORE!WE LOVE IT!G-RE-AT S-TORY!

This is the seed of a great story (with a lot of truth about human nature and war), but these are already complex characters and they want more room to stretch out and grow, more time to tell their stories. I hope you find it in you to come back to it!