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| Written 2008-01-23 ch 1,  | abusewhoa! I hope that you are still working on this story, because it's definitely caught my eye. I think it was smart that you grouped the prologue and chapter 1 together, as well. . . I probably should have thought about doing something like that! I hope you update soon! I think you've got a real gem here. |
| Everything to you 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. I like it. Now with the proluge it was okay, but it didn't catch my attention. I thought the prayer was too long. I thought that if the prayer wasn't as long and it was a little different like it in third person going on so and so sat at their family table blah blah balh. but I loved the first chapter. Now that got my attention. I like the chapter with the dress maker dude. I thought the backround as why they were taking them in was sad, but it fit. ~Everything to you |
| S.L. Haze 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI can't wait to read more! |