reminds me of Dogma

I hope you write more soon cousin, because I miss this story :(
*sigh* haha
I miss you more though! Jeeze :P

I hope you can write again soon!

I cant wait. The story is great! Please write more.

Poor Bob! He was too young to die! Or was he...? -shifts eyes from side to side-

Ooh, interesting concept and symbolism. I loved the way this chapter was written with the unconscious thoughts dualing with reality. I'll be sure to read on.

I like their names. They're good.

The names are amazing, obviously. They suit the characters perfectly! I loved this chapter, hehe. I want to read more! Ahh! Lol, well I am going to print this story out one of these days so I can start drawing for you! *dances* Keep up the stellar work cousin :)

Really really good!

5 words. THIS STORY IS BLOODY FANTASTIC.
That's all :) Hehehe.

Very interesting story so far. I'm really loving the concept ^_^

noo! continue!! what did this amazing man do?

you write very well! I dont understand why he shot her in the head! I am going to read chapter three now! I am very hyper! forgive me! :D

This is damn exciting and I can't wait to read more, I can just taste an excellent story in the making :P

oh how I love it, love it love it love it.
Very much indeed. It's good that your still dragging out until the plot, it sparks interest and makes me wanna read to find out more haha. Keep it up cuz!