This is such a cool concept! I really enjoyed reading the prologue to find out what this story was about. After reading the Title and then the mini summary I felt I just had to sneak a peak. Now that I have, I'm pretty sure I'm just going to have to keep reading :)

reminds me of Dogma

I hope you write more soon cousin, because I miss this story :(
*sigh* haha
I miss you more though! Jeeze :P

I hope you can write again soon!

I cant wait. The story is great! Please write more.

Poor Bob! He was too young to die! Or was he...? -shifts eyes from side to side-

Ooh, interesting concept and symbolism. I loved the way this chapter was written with the unconscious thoughts dualing with reality. I'll be sure to read on.

I like their names. They're good.

The names are amazing, obviously. They suit the characters perfectly! I loved this chapter, hehe. I want to read more! Ahh! Lol, well I am going to print this story out one of these days so I can start drawing for you! *dances* Keep up the stellar work cousin :)

Really really good!

5 words. THIS STORY IS BLOODY FANTASTIC.
That's all :) Hehehe.

Very interesting story so far. I'm really loving the concept ^_^

noo! continue!! what did this amazing man do?

you write very well! I dont understand why he shot her in the head! I am going to read chapter three now! I am very hyper! forgive me! :D

This is damn exciting and I can't wait to read more, I can just taste an excellent story in the making :P