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Astarayl 2007-11-10 . chapter 1
"A little hand holding" seems a little awkward syllable-wise.. perhaps "a hand to hold" would fit better?
In any case, I like the idea/message. It's a well-structured piece.
Doxology 2007-11-05 . chapter 1
Wow. I really don't even know what to say. I'm it's so short and simple, but seems like it means so much. I adore it.

Peace and Love

~> H.P. Warble
smile for the sunshine 2007-11-05 . chapter 1
I understand it. And I kinda like the purpose of the poem...The meaning behind it. I think that was nice. Good work. Keep writing. = )
Smoky Bear 2007-11-05 . chapter 1
cute. it's distant and vauge which reflects on the theme.
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