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scarlet stars 2008-03-27 . chapter 1
Ok, I have read some of your pieces and finally thought it would be a good idea to finally review one of them :) Well, mostly the reason why I never did review was because your poems are SO amazing. I am not kidding. You are seriously gifted at this. (you are so going on my fav authors!)
a silenced revolution 2007-11-27 . chapter 1
And it is so hard not to let the world take one's heart.

But hope is always good.
Imaginary Strangers 2007-11-17 . chapter 1
What forlorn imagery. I loved:

"I'm trying to convince myself that the
world will never take my heart, although
the crimson figure tells me otherwise."

Beautiful and tragic. Lovely job.
Which Mistake am I 2007-11-08 . chapter 1
You're already loved Silly Goose! ♥ Lol well I love you just as much as I love this poem which is A LOT!! lol
DiaRose 2007-11-08 . chapter 1
Oh, how sad. I really feel very sad, it's really beautiful! I love it.

Love,
~Dia
IdeasInTheAir 2007-11-05 . chapter 1
This was cool. It's kind of deep, well, duh, all of your stuff is deep. Anyways, I liked it. You are a very good word chooser. Now I'm going to give you a fancy title. The Honourary Word Chooser, 1st Class.
That's pretty intense. I have no idea what first class really means. I'll play it by ear.
Anyways, good job!
smile for the sunshine 2007-11-05 . chapter 1
I love this. It is amazing. I love the imagery and I think the length (how it was short) added to the affect of your poem. Your individuality also added to your piece. Good work. Keep witing. = )
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