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| The Prettiest Banana 2008-02-15 ch 1,  | abuseOhwow. This is beautiful. I adore this bit - Just like your Butterf l i e s And R a i n bows. - fantastic play on words. You're so talented! Definitely another one for the faves. Bravo. |
| Emily 2007-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseDude u know i freakin' love this. It describes things that i know all too well. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseExcellent use of italics/bold print! Very powerful. The words are so sharp and brutal. Amazing job! Adding to favorites. |
| kloun doll 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abusesad, but I think it's true what the poem means. |
| kelsi bones 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseI always say butterflies and rainbows! That's so cool :D I really liked this. Good use of effects (bold, italics, spacing, etc.) I'm so sorry about what happened to your story btw. I was looking forward to reading it! k.X |
| Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. . .I know this may be weird to say, but that is a beautiful poem. I love how you accent some areas with bold or italics, it really adds to the meaning and conveys it better than any old regular type could. Very, very deep. |
| Can't Be Saved 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abusedamn...i like it i really do |