Ohwow. This is beautiful.
I adore this bit -

Just like your Butterf l i e s
And R a i n bows.

- fantastic play on words.
You're so talented!
Definitely another one for the faves.
Bravo.

Dude u know i freakin' love this. It describes things that i know all too well.

Excellent use of italics/bold print! Very powerful. The words are so sharp and brutal. Amazing job! Adding to favorites.

sad, but I think it's true what the poem means.

I always say butterflies and rainbows! That's so cool :D

I really liked this.
Good use of effects
(bold, italics, spacing, etc.)

I'm so sorry about what happened to your story btw.
I was looking forward to reading it!

k.X

Wow. . .I know this may be weird to say, but that is a beautiful poem. I love how you accent some areas with bold or italics, it really adds to the meaning and conveys it better than any old regular type could. Very, very deep.

damn...i like it i really do