 The Prettiest Banana 2008-02-15 . chapter 1Ohwow. This is beautiful.
I adore this bit -
Just like your Butterf l i e s
And R a i n bows.
- fantastic play on words.
You're so talented!
Definitely another one for the faves.
Bravo. |
 Emily 2007-11-07 . chapter 1 Dude u know i freakin' love this. It describes things that i know all too well. |
 xDancingintheRainx 2007-11-07 . chapter 1Excellent use of italics/bold print! Very powerful. The words are so sharp and brutal. Amazing job! Adding to favorites. |
 kloun mannequin 2007-11-05 . chapter 1sad, but I think it's true what the poem means. |
 kelsi bones 2007-11-05 . chapter 1I always say butterflies and rainbows! That's so cool :D
I really liked this.
Good use of effects
(bold, italics, spacing, etc.)
I'm so sorry about what happened to your story btw.
I was looking forward to reading it!
k.X |
 Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 1Wow. . .I know this may be weird to say, but that is a beautiful poem. I love how you accent some areas with bold or italics, it really adds to the meaning and conveys it better than any old regular type could. Very, very deep. |
 Can't Be Saved 2007-11-05 . chapter 1damn...i like it i really do |