This was a wonderful short story! I loved it. Bravo!
Peace, love, Laughter~
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so sweet :D

I thought that this was a wonderful start of a story, but, if you don't mind my saying so, I feel as though you could have done better. How, you may ask? I think that if the character's personalities had been more developed (and if they'd been given names) then the story would have been taken to a brand new level.

That being said, I liked the piece that you presented to us; the plot was cute if not completely accurate. A completely accurate plot would never have a simple messanger stumble into the Emperor by chance, but, as a ficticous story, I find the plot has potential and is quite adorable.

Just some kind, positive critism.

Rini1031