 a silenced revolution 2007-11-27 . chapter 1It's beautiful, of course.
I'm sorry. I hope she gets better. |
 smile for the sunshine 2007-11-18 . chapter 1Aw, that's really sad but it came out really well. = ) |
 stars.are.watching 2007-11-16 . chapter 1I like that you didn't sugarcoat it, you just got straight to the point. Heartbreaking. |
 spiderfly 2007-11-13 . chapter 1This is painful to read, yet strangely matter of fact. Makes you think. |
 Needa S 2007-11-08 . chapter 1Very sad. Awesome job putting this together though. Write on. |
 Which Mistake am I 2007-11-08 . chapter 1W♥W! is all that comes to mind... |
 DiaRose 2007-11-08 . chapter 1Lovely. Terribly real thoughts, and wonderfully worded.
Love,
~Dia |
 tearing hands 2007-11-06 . chapter 1My favorite parts were: "Fingers lodged down her throat hoping to / push the right button" and "It's getting / harder everyday to connect herself with reality". It flows perfectly and feels so hopeless.
My friend was anorexic for a long time and only just started to get better. It hurts to look at her because she's so painfully thin.
Thank you for writing this. It's beautiful. |
 IdeasInTheAir 2007-11-06 . chapter 1Wow, this is deep. What's Bolimia? It sounds horrible, and I really like this. It's crazy good, good enough to get you promoted to Honourary Word Chooser, 2nd Class. Yay! Anyways, I think that this has a angst mood to it, (well duh) and you can really tell you're speaking of someone who's sick. It's terrible. But excellent.=)
Good job, once again!
~Danielle=) |
 Ashelin 2007-11-06 . chapter 1How horrible. I liked how you used the parentheses. I could really relate to "It's getting harder every day to connect herself with reality" *shivers* So sad, and that's just such a horribe feeling. Great job. |
 Alpha de la Omega 2007-11-05 . chapter 1Well written. You can feel the frustration lives with day to day. |