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| a silenced revolution 2007-11-27 ch 1,  | abuseIt's beautiful, of course. I'm sorry. I hope she gets better. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's really sad but it came out really well. = ) |
| ohthevoices 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseI like that you didn't sugarcoat it, you just got straight to the point. Heartbreaking. |
| spiderfly 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is painful to read, yet strangely matter of fact. Makes you think. |
| Needa S 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseVery sad. Awesome job putting this together though. Write on. |
| Which Mistake am I 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseW♥W! is all that comes to mind... |
| DiaRose 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Terribly real thoughts, and wonderfully worded. Love, ~Dia |
| tearing hands 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseMy favorite parts were: "Fingers lodged down her throat hoping to / push the right button" and "It's getting / harder everyday to connect herself with reality". It flows perfectly and feels so hopeless. My friend was anorexic for a long time and only just started to get better. It hurts to look at her because she's so painfully thin. Thank you for writing this. It's beautiful. |
| IdeasInTheAir 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is deep. What's Bolimia? It sounds horrible, and I really like this. It's crazy good, good enough to get you promoted to Honourary Word Chooser, 2nd Class. Yay! Anyways, I think that this has a angst mood to it, (well duh) and you can really tell you're speaking of someone who's sick. It's terrible. But excellent.=) Good job, once again! ~Danielle=) |
| Ashelin 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseHow horrible. I liked how you used the parentheses. I could really relate to "It's getting harder every day to connect herself with reality" *shivers* So sad, and that's just such a horribe feeling. Great job. |
| Alpha de la Omega 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseWell written. You can feel the frustration lives with day to day. |