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god this is beautiful. the lines are so fine between emotions its sometimes hard to tell them apart & you captured it

I love this piece. I don't know if it's the sheer poetic quality, the way you give words and take away certainty until you push its relevance aside with that last question, because you talked about his lips and hands and I could only imagine his eyes as he spoke and kissed and stroked and closing as he pulls you close.

You once wrote in a review that I crawled into your head. With this, you crawled into mine. Last night I fell asleep in the park with my ex boyfriend, and he told me he missed me even though he shouldn't have.

This is so close to what I would have written about it that it scares me, but it's a freefall sort of fear, the sort that asks for more.

Don't stop.

It's chilling how in the aftermath of things you can have no idea of how much things really changed, or if its only wishful thinking.

loved it.

That is cute. I kinda like it. It is well written. Sweet. Unique. = )