i love the way this reads, the way it flows and i had to read it a million times before i had wrapped my head around each word. beautiful :)

Beautiful!

Once again a wonderful piece (that I, unfortunately, can't quite understand, possibly because I don't know the circumstances of your writing it) but as ever I love your use of language and the way that each sentence flows into the next like slightly disjointed silk. You are a truly amazing writer with a style like nothing else I've read and as such come among my list of most greatly admired authors published or otherwise.

When I finished reading this, two words popped into my head: road trip! Those last few lines were killer. :)

-pb

Very short, but I love the language, the unexpected usage of the different words- a lot of your work seems to have that, but it's a definite plus. Only two spelling errors I saw were 'sustenance' and 'flammable', but that's really it.