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Reviews For: First Kiss

Delany Lamb
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseA very sweet piece. I find the rhyme scheme adds to the innocent, 'childlike' approach to the situation. Very well written. It made me think of nursery rhymes and fairy tales! Loved it.
The Candlelight Hour
2007-11-30
ch 1,
abuseOkay, im not gonna review everything (cuz, you know AP global), but this is special. i luvs it. it makes me fuzzy (OH, IT HAS SUCH A FUZZY LITTLE HEAD...) yeah. you rock, porcupine.

-dinosaur
Oracle of Destiny
2007-11-10
ch 1,
abuseAww, this is such a loving and well expressed poem that is written straight from the heart. I liked how it flowed and I think the meaning was very sweat as well :) Thanks for reviewing me too xD
RoseLife
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseSo very cute =P
i loved it, it was soft and meaningful XD
great work
~Rose~
Faithless Juliet
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseThis is so sweet, and the emotions are so pure. I am so in love with this creation, keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.
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