NEAR SUICIDE ATTEMPT!?! I hope writing this means that you've recovered.

I was pretty down for quite some time too, but now that I look back, the problems seem so trivial. I like your poem. Who cares about grammar when the idea is there? I totally agree that taking a step back makes everything look so much more beautiful.

"To think that I was going to give it up?"

Love the title of the poem. Keep writing! It's beautiful!

On a side note, I've updated my story, so if you're interested, feel free to take a look.

Thanks for the nice poem. Loved it!

It made me a little sad. But I saw the scenery like so clearly. Good work. And I hope, there are no more suicide attempts.

Beautifully imagery on this poem. I hope there are no more suicide attempts. Great work!

~Twilight Starr~