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Isca 2008-09-20 . chapter 1
I loved this, especially since it reminded me of 'Hannibal Lecter,' and I imagined it as something that he could have very well been thinking about 'Clarice.'
crinkled aster ribbon 2008-02-26 . chapter 1
awesome. can't really say more than that (sometimes i'm always not so eloquent).
relapse into change 2007-12-16 . chapter 1
ugg, my neck hurts i think i'm bending it too much
i have part one of a french mid-term test thingy tomorrow and i really should be studying seeing i'm making like a 25% in the class but god, i love this poem. this review is kind of late and i admit the first time i read it i didn't review but now i decided to because i love it. i mean, even though it was only two lines it was really powerful to me. nice job :) keep writing
classic violet 2007-12-07 . chapter 1
Frigging beautiful, even if it is only two lines. Gorgeous.
simpleplan13 2007-11-16 . chapter 1
I like this a lot.. its a great simile.. unique and interesting
Miz E. Mak 2007-11-16 . chapter 1
short, weird, and awesome. who cares if it's a failed haiku. It's a brilliant, short poem. And sometimes those are the hardest to write.
Aquafied 2007-11-11 . chapter 1
nothing new, nothing new
what happened to you?
Realilly 2007-11-08 . chapter 1
Whoa. Nice. At first I was annoyed when i saw the description of necrophilia and then I opened it and read the two lines. I was all O.o that's it?

But then I got it. And it made so much sense. X} I like it a lot, the whole "hanging" thing totally made sense. Is this a haiku or something? *thinks* I don't think so, but I'm not sure. I'm only a freshman, so I think I'm excused. X}

Nice job. Onto your others...
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-11-07 . chapter 1
I remember this one. ;) I do love this poem, though. Its brevity makes it what it is. Fantastic. Keep writing! :)
she smolders 2007-11-07 . chapter 1
Simple, and almost barely there with its abruptness, but those two lines linger in my mind. I like this. Take care.
Kicking Poe 2007-11-06 . chapter 1
I love how this is so encapsulated yet complete. worded so well I don't feel the horror, only a raw uneasy beauty. well done. cheers.
kaylajac 2007-11-06 . chapter 1
creepy and amazing both.
kelsi bones 2007-11-06 . chapter 1
This is pretty, in a horror-filled faerie tale type of way.

k.X
hey maria 2007-11-06 . chapter 1
It's creative. Kinda icky, but creative.
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