 Isca 2008-09-20 . chapter 1I loved this, especially since it reminded me of 'Hannibal Lecter,' and I imagined it as something that he could have very well been thinking about 'Clarice.' |
 crinkled aster ribbon 2008-02-26 . chapter 1awesome. can't really say more than that (sometimes i'm always not so eloquent). |
 relapse into change 2007-12-16 . chapter 1ugg, my neck hurts i think i'm bending it too much
i have part one of a french mid-term test thingy tomorrow and i really should be studying seeing i'm making like a 25% in the class but god, i love this poem. this review is kind of late and i admit the first time i read it i didn't review but now i decided to because i love it. i mean, even though it was only two lines it was really powerful to me. nice job :) keep writing |
 classic violet 2007-12-07 . chapter 1Frigging beautiful, even if it is only two lines. Gorgeous. |
 simpleplan13 2007-11-16 . chapter 1I like this a lot.. its a great simile.. unique and interesting |
 Miz E. Mak 2007-11-16 . chapter 1short, weird, and awesome. who cares if it's a failed haiku. It's a brilliant, short poem. And sometimes those are the hardest to write. |
 Aquafied 2007-11-11 . chapter 1nothing new, nothing new
what happened to you? |
 Realilly 2007-11-08 . chapter 1Whoa. Nice. At first I was annoyed when i saw the description of necrophilia and then I opened it and read the two lines. I was all O.o that's it?
But then I got it. And it made so much sense. X} I like it a lot, the whole "hanging" thing totally made sense. Is this a haiku or something? *thinks* I don't think so, but I'm not sure. I'm only a freshman, so I think I'm excused. X}
Nice job. Onto your others... |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2007-11-07 . chapter 1I remember this one. ;) I do love this poem, though. Its brevity makes it what it is. Fantastic. Keep writing! :) |
 she smolders 2007-11-07 . chapter 1Simple, and almost barely there with its abruptness, but those two lines linger in my mind. I like this. Take care. |
 Kicking Poe 2007-11-06 . chapter 1I love how this is so encapsulated yet complete. worded so well I don't feel the horror, only a raw uneasy beauty. well done. cheers. |
 kaylajac 2007-11-06 . chapter 1creepy and amazing both. |
 kelsi bones 2007-11-06 . chapter 1This is pretty, in a horror-filled faerie tale type of way.
k.X |
 hey maria 2007-11-06 . chapter 1It's creative. Kinda icky, but creative. |