so simple & beautiful. :)

delicious, if you don't mind me sayin'.

:)

I loved this, especially since it reminded me of 'Hannibal Lecter,' and I imagined it as something that he could have very well been thinking about 'Clarice.'

awesome. can't really say more than that (sometimes i'm always not so eloquent).

ugg, my neck hurts i think i'm bending it too much

i have part one of a french mid-term test thingy tomorrow and i really should be studying seeing i'm making like a 25% in the class but god, i love this poem. this review is kind of late and i admit the first time i read it i didn't review but now i decided to because i love it. i mean, even though it was only two lines it was really powerful to me. nice job :) keep writing

Frigging beautiful, even if it is only two lines. Gorgeous.

I like this a lot.. its a great simile.. unique and interesting

short, weird, and awesome. who cares if it's a failed haiku. It's a brilliant, short poem. And sometimes those are the hardest to write.

nothing new, nothing new

what happened to you?

Whoa. Nice. At first I was annoyed when i saw the description of necrophilia and then I opened it and read the two lines. I was all O.o that's it?

But then I got it. And it made so much sense. X} I like it a lot, the whole "hanging" thing totally made sense. Is this a haiku or something? *thinks* I don't think so, but I'm not sure. I'm only a freshman, so I think I'm excused. X}

Nice job. Onto your others...

I remember this one. ;) I do love this poem, though. Its brevity makes it what it is. Fantastic. Keep writing! :)

Simple, and almost barely there with its abruptness, but those two lines linger in my mind. I like this. Take care.

I love how this is so encapsulated yet complete. worded so well I don't feel the horror, only a raw uneasy beauty. well done. cheers.

creepy and amazing both.

This is pretty, in a horror-filled faerie tale type of way.

k.X