Wow. Brilliant. Short, but it took my breath away, especially "when i look at you? i can feel you breathing in my bones." Plus, "smelling of cold" is a perfect description. Just...I can't even describe it, but know that I love it. Added to my favorite stories.

I like the metaphor for your body its unique and great.. I also like the ending a lot

Simple yet effective. I like the last line best. Write on.

~Anna~ ^_^