That was beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I dance for the pure enjoyment of dancing too, and you captured the emotion in a way I wouldn't have thought was possible. Wonderful, wonderful job.

Doofus, dance with her! ;) You are very good at capturing the mood of a particular time and place. Not much is known about the characters or setting yet you grabbed my interest. Well done!

That was just beautiful. I know it sounds weird. But beautiful is the only way I can describe it. You're a great writer, and I though this short story was absolutely beautiful. (:

-JN Rivers