|Reviews for Better Than Happily Never After|
| The lone canine 11/12/10 . chapter 1
If a poem means something to you, then it will definitely mean something to the person reading it, because people can connect. This was really good as usual, I love your poems!
| ThatLovelyDarkMelody 5/3/10 . chapter 1
I love poems to mothers ;D
I wrote one for my mom, it wasn't nearly as good but still.
I have a question and since I'm half asleep and not thinking coherently it might be insanely stupid, but is this poem about leaving for college, or just leaving home in general?
| Dana S 3/20/10 . chapter 1
| thewhimsicalbard 12/26/09 . chapter 1
I can understand why you were hesitant to post this one. It is pretty intensely personal. I hate being the awkward person to ask this question, but did you lose your mom?
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo 12/3/09 . chapter 1
I loved this :D
It holds a lot of emotion.
| Wicca Girl 5/18/09 . chapter 1
Really great poem ... I love it ]
| Captain Lucky 10/27/08 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I love the way it's written in second person and the phrases you used.
| EyesEmphatic 7/21/08 . chapter 1
Sometimes I wish I could just go home...
Your formatting is great, the stilting keeps you on your toes, so you don't miss a thing. Nice job!
| Purpose 4/8/08 . chapter 1
We never know what we have until we lose it (so the old saying goes). I wondering if you were going off to college overseas when you wrote this (I don't know). I know I'll miss my home when I go off to college (especially my parents because they've been there forever). This was a really sweet poem and I hope you got back together with your mum.
| Sexy Vampirechick 4/7/08 . chapter 1
Aww...such a sad poem. *sniff sniff*...Very well written! Sometimes I have this feeling. *sigh* can't do anything about...
| ChicChicChic 3/30/08 . chapter 1
i read ur other works, before this which were obviously splendid but i guess itis the fact that this poem and my first poem bear similarities,they both are quite personal and i too really wasnt sure that i should launch it,and therefore i review this one first..the emotions couldnt have been portrayed in a simpler and effective form and it was a really good peice of work..
wud love to hear from u
| socks-lost 3/25/08 . chapter 1
wow, I liked it. it was...delicate, soft, i don't see that very often. keep iy up
| Artemis Reborn 3/21/08 . chapter 1
I love the tenderness with which you write this. One's love for their mother can be the most perfect, pure emotion. Another wonderful job. ) I do believe I'm falling in love with your writing! *sighs* Can't be helped. You did a wonderful job of leaving it open enough that every reader has the opportunity to see a part of their lives within. This is... *speechless* I loved it. I really did. Thank you.
| Vampire Kitsune 2/3/08 . chapter 1
Oh wow, this is really touching... keep writing!
| Shalafi 1/23/08 . chapter 1
Oh my. This is probably one of the best and most emotionally full works I've read. I haven't written anything in awhile, and haven't posted in probably over a year, but this seriously inspired me! :-)