I loved this :D
Amazing poem.
It holds a lot of emotion.

Hey!!

Really great poem ... I love it =]

Beautiful. I love the way it's written in second person and the phrases you used.

=)
CL

Sometimes I wish I could just go home...

Your formatting is great, the stilting keeps you on your toes, so you don't miss a thing. Nice job!

We never know what we have until we lose it (so the old saying goes). I wondering if you were going off to college overseas when you wrote this (I don't know). I know I'll miss my home when I go off to college (especially my parents because they've been there forever). This was a really sweet poem and I hope you got back together with your mum.

Aww...such a sad poem. *sniff sniff*...Very well written! Sometimes I have this feeling. *sigh* can't do anything about...

i read ur other works, before this which were obviously splendid but i guess itis the fact that this poem and my first poem bear similarities,they both are quite personal and i too really wasnt sure that i should launch it,and therefore i review this one first..the emotions couldnt have been portrayed in a simpler and effective form and it was a really good peice of work..

wud love to hear from u

wow, I liked it. it was...delicate, soft, i don't see that very often. keep iy up

I love the tenderness with which you write this. One's love for their mother can be the most perfect, pure emotion. Another wonderful job. =) I do believe I'm falling in love with your writing! *sighs* Can't be helped. You did a wonderful job of leaving it open enough that every reader has the opportunity to see a part of their lives within. This is... *speechless* I loved it. I really did. Thank you.

Art.

Oh wow, this is really touching... keep writing!

Oh my. This is probably one of the best and most emotionally full works I've read. I haven't written anything in awhile, and haven't posted in probably over a year, but this seriously inspired me! :-)

bravo. im actually at a loss for words. this is... holy crap amazing. my jaw actually dropped when i started reading this!! i love it!!

I want my Mommy! Great job, thanks for sharing.

The hurt of saying bye to your mom, and then realizing how nmuch you lover her, and mi her, and you just have to go back, and be with her.

This wa really good. Keep it up!

Very nice piece. I understood the theme of a child going away to college and how both mother and child believe that this will be in a way salvation, but at first it seemed as though this child was dying and going to a place that both had felt was better than where they were. Maybe I just saw a deeper meaning, or maybe this peom could just be used as an reference for many examples which only tells me how great of a writer you are. I can see why this peom is so close to your heart. It's beautiful, why else wouldn't it be. And it's message is strong, stretching past just one thought. Excellent job.