Reviews for Better Than Happily Never After

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EyesEmphatic 2008-07-21 ch 1,	abuseSometimes I wish I could just go home... Your formatting is great, the stilting keeps you on your toes, so you don't miss a thing. Nice job!
Purpose 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseWe never know what we have until we lose it (so the old saying goes). I wondering if you were going off to college overseas when you wrote this (I don't know). I know I'll miss my home when I go off to college (especially my parents because they've been there forever). This was a really sweet poem and I hope you got back together with your mum.
Sexy vampirechick 2008-04-07 ch 1,	abuseAww...such a sad poem. sniff sniff...Very well written! Sometimes I have this feeling. sigh can't do anything about...
ChicChicChic 2008-03-30 ch 1, anon.	abusei read ur other works, before this which were obviously splendid but i guess itis the fact that this poem and my first poem bear similarities,they both are quite personal and i too really wasnt sure that i should launch it,and therefore i review this one first..the emotions couldnt have been portrayed in a simpler and effective form and it was a really good peice of work.. wud love to hear from u
soccerfreak18 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abusewow, I liked it. it was...delicate, soft, i don't see that very often. keep iy up
Artemis Reborn 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseI love the tenderness with which you write this. One's love for their mother can be the most perfect, pure emotion. Another wonderful job. =) I do believe I'm falling in love with your writing! sighs Can't be helped. You did a wonderful job of leaving it open enough that every reader has the opportunity to see a part of their lives within. This is... speechless I loved it. I really did. Thank you. Art.
Vampire Kitsune 2008-02-03 ch 1,	abuseOh wow, this is really touching... keep writing!
Shalafi 2008-01-23 ch 1,	abuseOh my. This is probably one of the best and most emotionally full works I've read. I haven't written anything in awhile, and haven't posted in probably over a year, but this seriously inspired me! :-)
Romanze 2007-12-28 ch 1,	abusebravo. im actually at a loss for words. this is... holy crap amazing. my jaw actually dropped when i started reading this!! i love it!!
SEMMU 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuseI want my Mommy! Great job, thanks for sharing.
Undrahas 2007-12-10 ch 1,	abuseThe hurt of saying bye to your mom, and then realizing how nmuch you lover her, and mi her, and you just have to go back, and be with her. This wa really good. Keep it up!
kelloggs256 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseVery nice piece. I understood the theme of a child going away to college and how both mother and child believe that this will be in a way salvation, but at first it seemed as though this child was dying and going to a place that both had felt was better than where they were. Maybe I just saw a deeper meaning, or maybe this peom could just be used as an reference for many examples which only tells me how great of a writer you are. I can see why this peom is so close to your heart. It's beautiful, why else wouldn't it be. And it's message is strong, stretching past just one thought. Excellent job.
Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseBravo! (When /I/ use an exclamation point, you know it’s extremely awesome.) 'Twas very well written; I liked the flow of the whole thing. Very nice. It was a little long, but so are a lot of good poems. Like the concept, too. Very nice. Keep it up.
shadowcat86 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseA little long, but very emotional. Good.
Abby Sequioa 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abusethis is a very well-written tkae on a very universal topic. thank you, for this poem.

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