If a poem means something to you, then it will definitely mean something to the person reading it, because people can connect. This was really good as usual, I love your poems!

I love poems to mothers ;D

I wrote one for my mom, it wasn't nearly as good but still.

I have a question and since I'm half asleep and not thinking coherently it might be insanely stupid, but is this poem about leaving for college, or just leaving home in general?

so touching!

I can understand why you were hesitant to post this one. It is pretty intensely personal. I hate being the awkward person to ask this question, but did you lose your mom?

I loved this :D

Amazing poem.

It holds a lot of emotion.

Hey!

Really great poem ... I love it ]

Beautiful. I love the way it's written in second person and the phrases you used.

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CL

Sometimes I wish I could just go home...

Your formatting is great, the stilting keeps you on your toes, so you don't miss a thing. Nice job!

We never know what we have until we lose it (so the old saying goes). I wondering if you were going off to college overseas when you wrote this (I don't know). I know I'll miss my home when I go off to college (especially my parents because they've been there forever). This was a really sweet poem and I hope you got back together with your mum.

Aww...such a sad poem. *sniff sniff*...Very well written! Sometimes I have this feeling. *sigh* can't do anything about...

i read ur other works, before this which were obviously splendid but i guess itis the fact that this poem and my first poem bear similarities,they both are quite personal and i too really wasnt sure that i should launch it,and therefore i review this one first..the emotions couldnt have been portrayed in a simpler and effective form and it was a really good peice of work..

wud love to hear from u

wow, I liked it. it was...delicate, soft, i don't see that very often. keep iy up

I love the tenderness with which you write this. One's love for their mother can be the most perfect, pure emotion. Another wonderful job. ) I do believe I'm falling in love with your writing! *sighs* Can't be helped. You did a wonderful job of leaving it open enough that every reader has the opportunity to see a part of their lives within. This is... *speechless* I loved it. I really did. Thank you.

Art.

Oh wow, this is really touching... keep writing!

Oh my. This is probably one of the best and most emotionally full works I've read. I haven't written anything in awhile, and haven't posted in probably over a year, but this seriously inspired me! :-)