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| Hoodwynk 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseThis seems like it is only relevant if you're in on the inside joke. I think that you could have distinguished the moral/point of the story more. Still, I thought it was kinda neat. Nice job. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseLol, this was great. The overdramatics of Sienna made me laugh. Wonderful job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Kristin 2007-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, ha! I guess that was funny (if you have a dark sense of humour). Which I do, so it doesn't matter haha :). That guy was very mean to her. Very well written, I praise you! ~Krisi |