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| poisonous.substance 2008-06-23 ch 3, | abuseThis story is really interesting please write more. |
| Linwe Ann 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abusethis is interesting so far. anything with cool shapeshifters is ok in my book. |
| eating staples 2007-11-13 ch 2, | abuseI think the bit with Mallia will be funny. The beginnings kind of slow but I'm sure things will pick up pace with the way you have it set up. Your grammar is better in this story than your other ones. Keep writing, I almost spelt keep, kepp... oh well. |