riley, do some of us a favor and contiue the f*ing story

I've never read anything like this!

Ouch! that girl sure does like her freedom. I thought your story was good. It was really well written, You should consider doing more with this story, it would turn out really great!

loll this is definitely different. but it's very creative, which is a good thing =] now that you're older, maybe you should edit this and see if it can be continued.

good luck writing =]

hahahhahahhahahah abby we sucked when we wrote this lmfao

Well I have to admit, the plot was a just a little cliche.
But, I'm sure that now that you're older (I assume) you're writing will improve! Keep going!