Loved the beginning of this story,
Love the guy tristan too! Just my type, you never can find ir books with guys like this in them, and thought this was great. Hope you continue :)

wow, thats one crazy family. lol but i definitely want to see what happens next!

So are you still debating on this story or what? I quite like how it's going, there are quite a few errors though. But you already know that, so i guess there's no need to point it out. Em, is the guys name Tristan or Tristian? I'm a smidgeon confused by that. Anyway, i like it. I've read the first three parts, so, yes. Hope you continue on with it.

please continue with the story, and update soon please!

interesting! I must say I prefer adonis to this tristan character, but I need more to base my decision off of.
So update! Quick like. :)

Oh my wow! That sounds like something me, my sister, and my mom would do :] Great prologue!

tristain sounds TOO hot, lol. i love snake bites, and eyebrow rings. and his hair!! and gosh, his eyes..lol

*drool*

ok, i gotta get a hold of myself,lol.

Too many needless detailed descriptions, like for the school receptionist. Too much retrospect, too little plot line, as if you put more into the background than where you want this to go. Your characters need a 'future' in order to make them interesting. And if you have to rely mainly on profanity to get your point across, it's a sad reflection on your communication skills. There's a lot of potential, but you've got to take more time with this.

I like the story so far.
Update soon ~

Who cares about errors? Fix those later. I wanna read more. I bet Adonis will like her but she won't like him and it will cause some problems because Tristian is white and she's not. Am I right? I need more. Please?

I like the way you write. It's like exactly the way Lamya would think or any female would. I really like it.

That beginning was crazy as hell. Too funny.

This story has a lot of potential and I would like to see it finished. Whenever you get a chance please write more. I am anxious, what happens next?

Oh..PLEASE continue...please!

Shontara, I hope that you will complete the story. I like your main character she is very fiesty. Who will be her love interest Adonis or Tristan?

I also wanted to state that beat down of the crack ho and the ex was to funny.

Thanks