Me again!
FINISH THE STORY! I am impatient sometimes, and I want to see this ending! (And you are so right about Ella and Ted).
Okay, while I was reading, I caught one mistake:
Bead should be Bed

but besides that, keep writing!
TTYL
Marilyse

Captured me from the beginning, so that's always saying something. I guess it had to do with "dragons"...not your typical dragon story, I guess that's it. *yay!!* Good luck!

Keep it up! Why do I have the feeling Jason will be one of the stronger warriors? >_>

First of all, your story is good. Though it isn't one of the best piece I have come across with, but yours worth my time reading, yeh.

So let me start off with the comment.

You have a tendency of starting your sentences with a noun. The 1st 3 paragraph begins with 'Emma' as the first word, and it might look a lil bit awkward. Try making them into passive form (especially for narrative notes) will smooth the flow between sentences.

Example:
[When his master, master Fucha]

You can replace it with something like this.

When his teacher, master Fucha
When his master, Fucha

Any story with dragons has my approval. :P

I'm particularly interested to see how the friendships would be affected if Ted passes. The "dragon fighters did not mix with foot fighters" particularly drew me in (curious to see how they interact, if at all). Keep writing! =)

No offense but you need to show, not tell. You just say things. Prove them to me, not simply say Ted hated assessments. Ella sounds like a Mary-sue, but the setting is good and I love dragons.