I like your writing style so far. I'll be interested to see where this goes.

Hah I can't get enough of this Jett boy ;D. He's such a cutie! His personality is just addicting and I keep laughing at his quirkiness.

Nikki is just insane o.o what a nutjob! I'd flip shit if someone pulled a stunt like that on me!! (Not that it's possible, since I'm the chick hah)

I like how it's got a very dark undertone, but with all of the dialogue, you're keeping the mood light for the most part. Nice :)

-continues reading-

Aw cute&swet(:
A couple of times I was furious at jett, but what can a man do? Lol
Great story

sigh... great story. keep the good work up!! =)
how did jett's parent's die?

I really loved the ending! (the epilogue, not the one where Alaira gets covered in brains after shooting Mitchell (though I did love the action)).

It was an awesomely good story, and I really loved all the action (but Mitchell made me angry a lot).

Keep Writing!

Hugglez & Toodlez

~ Tigery ^_^

WOW!! I just read the last two chapters, as I've been a bit busy. I am so sad to see this piece finished, I loved it so much. It was a great story, thank you so much for writing it!

good ending :)

OH MY GOSHH! YES! That was amazing!

Thank you so much for writing this story! Yes, it was drawn out, but getting to the end was SO worth the wait!

aw i love it :D

AW
that is so much happier than i expected
and twin girls
aw
so cute!
jett - the cutest hero out haha
how very sweet.
loved it
definitely going to miss it
but hey, there's more of your stories to look forward to

izzie

Yay.
Happy ending. One dead man, two little girls, a wife, and a best friend. (:

yey! im so glad they lived!
gah i love this story!
such a good ending

OH MY GOD! I can't tell you how long I screamed in shock after reading that. I mean this in an utterly sweet way, just so you know, but Mitchell's demise was so anti-climatic that I had to read the sentence about three times before I really got it. lol he was such a crazy bastard that I figured he'd go out differently. I LOVED that he went out the way he did though, AND that Alaira shot him ANY what she said to him, that was the absolutely fucking BEST part! :)

Hey Lizzy girl really enjoyed this update and happy that Mitchell is finally dead and its funny that Alair is the one who actually ended up shooting him at that too. Looking forward to the epilogue too hope all is well with you have a great day.

Thanks,
IP

what do you mean it will cover where they are now?