I really like this. This poem has something akin to a Shakespearean tone to it, which makes me smile. I wasn't too fond of the play, to be honest. Lovely poem. :)

-pb

Loved it. That's kind of how I felt after reading Romeo and Juliet, while everyone else praised it highly, so I can relate.

An interesting peoem, yet the bitter sound behind the metaphor is somehwat heart-wrenching in itself. However, it is a new take on the age-old tragedy, rather than the praise and admiration that is often given, this is a much more refreshing view. Well done, I enjoyed it immensely.