Oh.

Awful. Heartwrenching, this is.

Fantasic writing, as always :)

good. but you should read the advice I have on my profile, work on all of them (well, maybe not number nine...) I didn't put them in this review because I've been flamed serveral times...

you are good. keep writing and don't linger over one poem, once it is written and edited, it is done. you have more to do...

I can relate to this completely. I loved it.

i liked this - a former me can totally relate to it... the skeletal framework and minimal description work really well. some really good lines scattered throughout. seems very honest and open.