|Reviews for Indelible Mistakes|
| EyesEmphatic 11/12/07 . chapter 1
Awful. Heartwrenching, this is.
Fantasic writing, as always :)
| Not Afraid of Bruises 11/7/07 . chapter 1
good. but you should read the advice I have on my profile, work on all of them (well, maybe not number nine...) I didn't put them in this review because I've been flamed serveral times...
you are good. keep writing and don't linger over one poem, once it is written and edited, it is done. you have more to do...
| detache 11/7/07 . chapter 1
I can relate to this completely. I loved it.
| Smoky Bear 11/7/07 . chapter 1
i liked this - a former me can totally relate to it... the skeletal framework and minimal description work really well. some really good lines scattered throughout. seems very honest and open.