Reviews for Liquid Oxygen - FictionPress.com

felicia13 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseElegant language has a place, and its place is here. Poetry is the best time to throw out really cool words and you do so, without fail, in these joria. Lovely. It's eye candy for us literary types. Merry Christmas! Felicia.
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-11-08 ch 1,	abuseI love the alliteration in this one, all those wonderful Ls strung together. Fabulous verb usage, too. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
Smoky Bear 2007-11-07 ch 1,	abusethis is a gorgeous image, lingering both on the page and in my mind. the wording is pure genius and very beautiful (as always). i know i have probably said this before but you just seem to get better at these and they are always delightful to read. i sat gazing at this one for ages.
ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2007-11-07 ch 1,	abusesome people (like me) can't do short poems well. You can. good write.