love this! Christ is amazing, isn't He?

A whole new approach to the idea of body piercing. :) And the poem is beautiful - the poem itself and, of course, the message in it. I love it. Great job.

wow...i think this is really good.
you really did a good job in creating images

the last line is really funny
'body piercing saved my life'
but i wonder, could it be too abrupt a change in tone?
it goes from reverent and adoring to almost sharp wit

but good job!

Excellent excellent excellent. Its so nice to find other Jesus Freaks on such public forums. You go girl!

~American Reject~

incredibly gorgeous. definitely a favorite.

and that ending ... intense.

i love it. keep writing -- God bless you.

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in the peace of Christ,
alison x

Beautiful. Awesome write. Write on and God Bless.