Okay, so I like the way this story was written in traditional fable style. But what was the boy's question? You never said his exact question.

This was a cute idea. The style was easy and simplistic, which worked pretty well. A few sentences didn't quite make sense to me, and I noticed a few spelling/grammar errors; but overall, I think you did a good job. I was quite disappointed, though, that we didn't find out the little boy's question, for after all, that was his whole reason for seeking the wind--was it not? Still, I did like how you portrayed the moon, as someone else mentioned, and the tale was sweet and enjoyable.

Oh, that was so cute, so wonderful!
I love it!
But now I want to know what the boy asked...
>.>

Very cute. I'm upset that we didn't find out what the little boy asked. I thought how you portrayed(sp) the moon was great. She felt like a motherly figure in the story. Even though the boy had no name it seemed to fit with the way you wrote the story. Its very cute.

~Everything to you

I love this. It is a great... hmm, what would you call it? Fable? Fairy Tale? Myth? I'm not sure, but I still love this.