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| Dark Elegance10 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseThis story totally took me on a trip! It was amazingly disturbing and twisted. I love the sarcastic way your characters are so laid back about this. And they are so deep. This is truly amazing. Thank you for posting. |
| Ghost in the Dark 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI wish I could have a doctor like that. This is really well written, very structured, and the whole idea of it was great. I enjoyed the dialogue between Ned and Dr. Freitag, as it seemed to have a realistic quality that I was able to follow really well. Their characters were quite enjoyable as well. Excellent job. ~Ghost |
| ChrnosMiko 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseWow... this was extremely well written. I like how you made NEd seems like a "civilized" murderer. I especailly love Dr. Freitag's reactions. Extremely well written. |