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Dark Elegance10
2007-11-07
ch 1,
abuseThis story totally took me on a trip! It was amazingly disturbing and twisted. I love the sarcastic way your characters are so laid back about this. And they are so deep. This is truly amazing. Thank you for posting.
Ghost in the Dark
2007-11-07
ch 1,
abuseI wish I could have a doctor like that.

This is really well written, very structured, and the whole idea of it was great. I enjoyed the dialogue between Ned and Dr. Freitag, as it seemed to have a realistic quality that I was able to follow really well. Their characters were quite enjoyable as well.

Excellent job.

~Ghost
ChrnosMiko
2007-11-07
ch 1,
abuseWow... this was extremely well written. I like how you made NEd seems like a "civilized" murderer. I especailly love Dr. Freitag's reactions. Extremely well written.
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