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Reviews For: Wine and Water
sunday night sky
2007-11-26
ch 1, 		abuseI love the flow of this - it is perfect. Every syllable works well. Beautiful piece, dark and breathtaking. Lovely job. x
Palace Flophouse and Grill
2007-11-07
ch 1, 		abuseWowowow.. .. I like this. The last line was espeically sullen, and dark, scary and beautiful. Great job.

Peace and Love

~> h.p. warble
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