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| kloun mannequin 2007-12-04 ch 1,  | abusesad but nice too, I guess the feeling in this is powerful, my favorite sentence: i let myself trust him with my secret of survival my sentences so full of mysteries good poem |
| creepy kiss on tuesday 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abusei like the last stanza a lot. it sucks, having to play pretend like it's love and just going through the motions. thats what this makes me think about. relationships that you push too far as if they had some substance even though while you're ringing them dry of any emotion there might be you expect dry powder to fall out because there is truly nothing there. omg that was a wierd review, i apologize. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseThe last stanza of this is just perfect. It's so great. I loved "i wake up with metaphors tangled around my legs." Of course, I'm a sucker for writing references in writing. I can only hope this isn't something you're actually going through. Love. It's so confusing. Keep writing! :) |
| Kicking Poe 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI love how much the mood changes from the first stanza to the last and the blurring of dream and reality. insightful and poignant as always - you give me much to ponder over. cheers. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseoh my goodness you totally conveyed what i am feeling better than what i ever could. i am putting this on my favorites list. it was *amazing*. i love the formatting, topic and language. wonderful. keep writing. = ) |