Reviews for eyes full of lies

burning in effigy 2008-01-03 ch 1,	abuseholy.. the first stanza is quite... "pleasantly sad/pushing angst" and then the second stanza is like "completely blows you away" with anger/emotion (lovelovelove- especially parentheses.. used perfectly) and the last line portrays desperation and is a beautiful way to end (sorry for not reviewing back for so long; real life's taken a lot of time) fantastic fantastic poem :]
owl3y3s 2007-11-09 ch 1,	abuseThat was awesome. Write on!
smile for the sunshine 2007-11-07 ch 1,	abuseoh, thats really sad. but i guess it is well written. it's short and simple but you did explain the way you feel. and that's what it's all about: expression. and you did just that.