Reviews for Beautiful Sleep - FictionPress.com

Hed in the Cloudz 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseOoh, that makes...I don't know, but I like it! It seems incredibly real, and bittersweet, and it's certainly well served by its simplicity. I do want to know more, though, or maybe it's just greed for more of your pretty words. I guess that if I had to give you a criticism, it wouldbe the punctuation. The fact that you punctuate occasionally makes those lines in which you do seem incredibly final, too much so, perhaps. Just my opinion, of course-- I'm sure that someone who actually knws things about poetry could tell you more acurately what's wrong or right. -Yna, from the Review Marathon-- see the link in my profile!
Almost-human 2008-01-09 ch 1,	abuseThis is so freaking good Dusk!! What have you been holding back all your life?!
windy girl 2007-11-07 ch 1,	abuseHa, that's a different take on things. I personally find people to be humorous when they sleep. I like to catch them unawares. -pb